Real Locations in Fictional Stories

My current WIP is set in Noble, Oklahoma, and since I am very familiar with this small town I am able to easily write about the sights and sounds of the town without much trouble or much research.  Research for me basically falls to interviewing local police about procedures in various situations that might arise in my novel, sitting in the local coffee shop along the main drag with laptop open, listening to conversations and maybe digging into some town history.  The thing to remember about using real locations in fictional stories is not to take it too seriously.

This process falls on a spectrum of total reality versus embellished reality.  Either we can create a complete life accurate representation of a place, set a completely fictional town or county within a real place, or base our towns on real places without actually taking us to those places.

An example of total reality are the novels written by Kathy Reichs, the forensic anthropologist who sets all of her novels in Canadian cities.  She describes these cities in a way that allows readers to experience the cities without ever actually traveling there.

An example of something in between are the novels written by William Faulkner.  His novels are set in fictional Yoknapatawpha County which is located within a very real Mississippi.  His characters are realistic people, but the county and towns in his novels and short stories are completely fictional.  Another example of this is The Walking Dead which sets its story in Georgia.  One can quickly find out through a Google search the location of the actual town of Woodbury, the maximum security prison only 16 miles to the northeast, but King County is completely fictional.

Of course the far end of the spectrum is where we create realistic locations that are completely fictional.  We have to go no further than J.R.R. Tolkien for this, but the ability to create a detailed fictional place like Middle Earth, complete with cultures, languages, history and geography is not something that many writers wish to tackle today.  Tolkien’s fictional world was so carefully created that it gave the reader a sense of depth that is not found in much fantasy writing today.

I will be using a real place for my novel that will eventually fade to a completely alien location.  I want it to be real enough for the reader that they could go to Noble after reading it and use my novel as a tour guide.  It’s a great little town, typical small town Oklahoma, and has the right feel and is isolated enough to serve the purposes of my plot.

Whatever your inclination, make sure that your setting is real enough for the reader that they will believe they are being transported there.  If the setting is not believable, they will lose interest trying  to fit your gaps together and then you will lose them.

Published by Roger Colby, Novelist, Editor

Roger Colby is a novelist and teacher who has taught English for nearly two decades. He is also an avid reader of science fiction who feels, like many other sci-fi readers, that he has read everything. He writes science fiction for the reader who is looking for the next best thing, something to excite them into reading again. This blog is his journey as a writer and his musings about writing. He also edits manuscripts for a fee and is an expert at helping you reach your full potential as a writer.

2 thoughts on “Real Locations in Fictional Stories

  1. Interesting. The excerpt you presented the other day had a twilight zone feel to it, and that show frequently tapped into “small-town” America. In the short passage I read, you brought that environment to life really well. I live halfway between New York and Philadelphia, so, as you can imagine, there isn’t much of that cultural flavor here.

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